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church bells all were broken.
Supernatural. Sam/Jess. R. 440 words. Spoilers for Pilot episode only. Title from Don McLean.


He breathes across her skin, warm beneath his palm, and he whispers, I'm sorry.

She squirms a little, lifts her hips just so, bumps his chin with her thigh. Exhale, inhale. She twists the sheets in one hand and his hair gently in the other and she says, Sorry for what?

Sam shakes his head. I don't know. I don't know why I said that. Never mind. He kisses her stomach and hooks two fingers in her waistband, then pulls.

::

They watch TV with her head in his lap, his fingers splayed across her ribcage. He laughs quietly when a shot or sound makes her jump, and Jess swats at his leg lazily with one hand. It isn't funny, she says, giggling.

He slides a hand under the fabric of her skirt and murmurs, Isn't it?

She makes a soft sound in her throat, an encouragement, as much of a yes as he needs. She closes her eyes, tips her head back, bares her throat, and he forgets how to breathe.

::

He's a good student: he learns.

One slow-sliding finger makes her whimper, two make her moan. He presses her thigh and she keens. A flicker of his tongue, then a slow, broad swipe, and she arches back and says his name over and over until it's just another sound.

::

She likes candles, lights them for Atmosphere, she says, and for the smell. Gardenia, she says and points. Jasmine. Juniper.

They all smell the same and sickly-sweet to him, and he wonders why the feel of her skin isn't a recognized texture, why her laugh isn't part of the Muzak, why the smell of her hair isn't a candle.

He kisses her forehead and repeats, like he's learning. Very seriously he says, Jasmine. And he points. Juniper. Gardenia.

She shows her teeth and her fingers inch around the waist of his jeans. She slips the button out of the eye, drags the zipper down, and nods her head three times. Yes, she says. Yes, and yes.

::

She holds him in one small hand, runs her fingers over him and then her lips, humming a melody he doesn't know as she goes. Her fingernails, painted soft pink, scrape his skin and he curses, arches up into her hand.

Sorry, she says, and she sounds like it, even smiling. Sorry. Here. Let me just—

::

He sleeps and remembers inside her. He dreams and he sees the curve of her back, the bones of her ankles, the rougher skin over her knees. He sleeps and sees her burning, sees her empty.

Awake, he can't tell the candles apart.

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Date: 2006-09-18 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la-folle-allure.livejournal.com
*CLAIMS HER SPOT*

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Date: 2006-09-18 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
You are relentless, aren't you? *LOVES*

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Date: 2006-09-18 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la-folle-allure.livejournal.com
OMG SAMMY IS SO HOT WHEN HE'S DOING WOMEN!!!!!!!!! The part with him sliding that GIANT porn hand of his up her skirt is just AASKD;FJSDKFJSDAKFJSDALKJFSD;LKJF

*swwons* Dammit, now I want to write HET!!! *CRIES*

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Date: 2006-09-18 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
I think we can agree that Sammy and his GIANT porn hands are ALWAYS hot. *flaily hands*

Oh, no. Not more het. I feel like I should be apologizing for that now...

*SNUGGLES YOU*

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Date: 2006-09-19 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la-folle-allure.livejournal.com
OMG! NEVER APOLOGIZE FOR BEING BETTER THAN EVERYTHING IN THE KNOWN WORLD!

YES, EVEN JENSEN!

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Date: 2006-09-18 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
Mmmmm. Wonderful then and sad that it's gone now.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 2006-09-19 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you! :O)

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Date: 2006-09-18 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ephemerall.livejournal.com
Jesus christ.

This was fantatically written. I love the images you're portraying here, the way he remembers her, and their experiences. The ending of it is just... holy shit, my heart is broken and bleeding and DAMN you kill me.

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Date: 2006-09-19 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
*gives your heart band aids* Thank you!

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Date: 2006-09-19 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ephemerall.livejournal.com
*puts on band aids* You're welcome.

So, pray tell, when are you going to break me next?

*loves on you*

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Date: 2006-09-19 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
If only I could hand in fic instead of lab reports, oh what a wonderful world it would be...

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Date: 2006-09-19 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ephemerall.livejournal.com
for serious, lover.

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Date: 2006-09-18 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] killabeez.livejournal.com
Beautiful, erotic, and powerful, and so achy. Thank you for this!

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Date: 2006-09-19 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :O)

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Date: 2006-09-19 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com
Oh, this is just wonderful. Sexy and yet insightful, and it's such a Sam thing, how he memorizes her and then can't forget about her later. Beatiful, aching ending. :)

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Date: 2006-09-19 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you! :O)

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com
Sensual. Sad and sensual.

Beautiful evocative writing.

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you. :O)

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] meinterrupted
Oh, this is awesome. Equal parts sweet, hot, and sad, this is just...gah. I love this. SO. MUCH.

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:25 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] meinterrupted
Also, you get mad props for quoting Don McLean (and for knowing who he is!).

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
*curties*

Though sadly, my knowledge of Don McLean stretches only about as far as the eight minutes, twenty something seconds of "American Pie" can carry me.

Now, comment on one of the titles I stole from Mark Knopfler, and I can go on for hours...

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Date: 2006-09-19 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you! :O)

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Date: 2006-09-23 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlitroses.livejournal.com
Omg. Remember four years ago when you didn't even know how to spell smut? You were so cute.

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Date: 2006-09-23 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
I'm still cute, wench. Snuggley, even!

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Date: 2006-09-24 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belleimani.livejournal.com
That's lovely.
Poor Sam.

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Date: 2006-09-24 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belleimani.livejournal.com
You're welcome!

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Date: 2006-12-30 01:41 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com
I have no idea how I got here, but this is lovely and breaky. Thank you.

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Date: 2006-12-30 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wheebubbles.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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