I'm quite stunned at the emotions you evoked in me with this stoy. its so painful, and moving. But mostly I'm stuck by how it conveys the dance they are doing of what they each need/want in their grief, what they think the other wants, and how hard it is for them to work this out.
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Date: 2006-10-08 12:04 am (UTC)A masterful piece of writing.